Presentazione me stessa per colloquio orale- esame a breve

lucia96.tonani
Pre favore potreste aiutarmi a vedere se è corretto il testo? Mi potete dire se ci sono errori o cose da aggiungere?
My name is (inserisco nome) , I'm 19 years old and I live in (inserisco città) with my family.
In my family there are four people: my mother who is really careful and patient with me , my father who is a hard worker and a clever man, my brother who is 16 years old and me.
Physically I consider myself a normal person: I've got brown hair, brown eyes and I'm tall, not too much but I like my height because I can wear heels without problems. I smile in every situation because I think that I smile can get better everything. I’m very shy at first but I became outgoing when I get comfortable with someone. I’m a kind person and I like listening to people and help them with their problems.
I like going out with my friends, listening music and also reading books, I prefer novel and fantasy book. Since 2004 I am part of Scout Association called AGESCI and with them I spend my weekend in nature. I like staying open-air. I like spend my free time volunteering in various needy area of my city. I am a volunteer in a structure for people with disabilities. I like staying with them because they can give me emotions that other people cannot.


Grazie mille per l'aiuto in anticipo :gratta
Speriamo l'esame vada bene ;) :angel

Risposte
lucia96.tonani
# reby66 :
Sei fenomenale invece
Bacii

Esagerata! comunque Grazie ancora

SweetRebel
Sei fenomenale invece
Bacii

lucia96.tonani
grazie mille. Pensavo ci fossero troppi errori perchè non sono molto brava in inglese

SweetRebel
E' perfetto, bella fantasia.

lucia96.tonani
Grazie mille

juventina1992
È ottimo

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