Traduzione brano!

rawrglare
"Hanno fatto uscire due album in rapida successione, diventando così una rock band da grandi show ad appena 18 anni di età. Hanno colto la cresta dell’onda emo di quel periodo, ma avevano una melodia diversa dai ragazzi con la frangetta nera e l’eyeliner di quei tempi, e la presenza della scintillante Hayley Williams li aveva destinati a grandi cose.
La band pratica il Cristianesimo – non molto comune nel territorio del rock’n’roll – ma erano riluttanti nel definirsi tali. Il chitarrista Josh Farro, infatti, diceva che sono cristiani, ma che non erano una band cristiana.
Appena uscì il loro secondo album, Riot!, la tensione all’interno del gruppo era sempre più pronta ad eruttare. Il cuore dei Paramore erano Hayley e Josh. Erano stati una coppia per qualche tempo nei primi giorni dei Paramore, ma come molte storie d’amore fra teenager, non è durata a lungo. Nel febbraio del 2008, un tour europeo fu cancellato all’improvviso per molte problematiche all’interno della band che andavano avanti da tempo.
In brevissimo tempo registrarono Brand New Eyes nel 2009, un solido rock album. Commercialmente, divennero più grandi che mai.
L’anno successivo, alla fine dell’estate, Josh e Zach dissero agli altri che lasciavano la band. Hayley e i membri rimanenti, Taylor York e Jeremy Davis, rilasciarono un comunicato dicendo che volevano che Josh e Zac facesero qualcosa che li renda davvero felici. Josh postò un blog da 1500 parole sul suo sito nel quale criticava ogni cosa riguardante la band e i testi di brand new eyes, soprattutto uno, descritto come un testo non-credente.
Passati due anni, e la band è a Londra per annunciare l’uscita del loro quarto album, il primo da quando sono solo in tre. Si chiama “Paramore” ed uscirà il 9 aprile."

Grazie!

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{Zahra}
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They have released two albums, one after the other, becoming a rock band at just 18 years old. Their kind of music at that time was emo. However, they had a different melody from the guys with the black bangs and the eyeliner. Also, the presence of Hayley Williams had destined them for great things.
The band practice Christianity -not very common in the rock and roll's territory- but they were reluctant to define themselves as such. The ex – guitarist, Josh Farro, said that they were Christians but they weren't a Christian band.
When they released their second album, ‘’Riot!’’, the tension in the group was ready to erupt. The heart of Paramore were Hayley and Josh. They were a couple for a little bit, but like most teenager stories they broke up. In February 2008, a European Tour was cancelled for many problems in the band.
Afterwards, in a very short time they recorded ‘’Brand New Eyes’’ in 2009. Commercially, they became bigger than ever.
The following year, at the end of the summer, Josh and Zac said to the others that they was leaving the band. Josh posted a post of 1500 worlds on his site where he criticized everything about the band.
Two years passed and, when the band was in London, they announced the release of their fourth album. It is called Paramore and it was released on 9 April.


L'hai fatta bene, sta attenta, pero`, a dove inserisci l'articolo 'the' - era l'errore piu` frequente.

rawrglare
Okei l'ho fatta, vedi
They have released two albums in quick succession, becoming a rock band at just 18 years of age. Thei kind of music in that time was emo, but they had a different melody from the guys with the black bangs and the eyeliner, and the presence of Hayley Williams had destined them for great things.
The band practice the Christianity -not very common in the rock and roll's territory- but they were reluctant to definice them like that. The ex guitarist Josh Farro said, infact, that they were christians but they weren't a cristian band.
When they released their secondo album, Riot!, the tension in the group was already ready to erupt. The heart of Paramore was Hayley and Josh. They were a couple for a little bit, but like the most teenager stories they broke up. Suddenly in the February 2008 an European Tour had been deleted for many problems in the band. In a very short time they recorded Brand New Eyes in the 2009. Commercially, they became bigger than ever.
The following year, at the end of the summer, Josh and Zac said to the other that they was leaving the band. Josh posted a post of 1500 worlds on his site where he cricized everything about the band.
Two years passed and, when the band was in London, they annouced the release of their fourth album. (questo pezzo l'ho un po' cambiato). It is called Paramore and it was released on 9 April.

{Zahra}
Non e` molto difficile, vuoi provare a farlo tu prima? Fanne almeno una parte, poi te la continuo/correggo.

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