Solo 100 parole inglese correzione
per favore mi serve una mano nel controllare se il tema di sole 100 parole a senso e se eventualmente ci sono degli errori nelle frasi, nella grammatica, nel lessico ecc.
grazie mille
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il tema è il seguente:
i have never been so disappoined in all my life.
whe I arriveded to stonehenge I saw so a lot of noiosy turist that I couldn't see . and near anything. there wer a lot ogf people selling pictures, postcard, calendars, and other souvenirs, they wanted me to buy something, but I went there only for visiting the monument, people had built two big roads near this amazing moniument it self. in my opinion people who visit stonenge must pay a ticket and the entrace must be definitive, so there will not so many turist.
grazie mille
aspetto una risposta prima possibile.
il tema è il seguente:
i have never been so disappoined in all my life.
whe I arriveded to stonehenge I saw so a lot of noiosy turist that I couldn't see . and near anything. there wer a lot ogf people selling pictures, postcard, calendars, and other souvenirs, they wanted me to buy something, but I went there only for visiting the monument, people had built two big roads near this amazing moniument it self. in my opinion people who visit stonenge must pay a ticket and the entrace must be definitive, so there will not so many turist.
Risposte
OK grazie mille.
nn è male te lo riscrivo condelle correzzione e te lo allungo un pochino cosiper fare qualcosa
I have never been so disappointed in all my life when I arrived in stonehenge located on the salisbury hill .i saw a lot of tourist that i cuoldn 't see ande there were asome people selling pictures postcards calendars ect they wanted me to buy something but i went here only for looking the setting and the big temple built by celts. near the monument there were two steets and the temple dedicated by the old god of sun was great and impressed me. in mmy opinion people who visit stonehedge must pay a ticket and the entrance must be definituve so there will not many tourists.
mi sembra ok attenta ai plurali e ai tempi verbali pure io li cannavo e un consiglio prova a pensare in inglese
I have never been so disappointed in all my life when I arrived in stonehenge located on the salisbury hill .i saw a lot of tourist that i cuoldn 't see ande there were asome people selling pictures postcards calendars ect they wanted me to buy something but i went here only for looking the setting and the big temple built by celts. near the monument there were two steets and the temple dedicated by the old god of sun was great and impressed me. in mmy opinion people who visit stonehedge must pay a ticket and the entrance must be definituve so there will not many tourists.
mi sembra ok attenta ai plurali e ai tempi verbali pure io li cannavo e un consiglio prova a pensare in inglese
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