Robinson Crusoe The Prototype Of The English Colonizer
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Robinson Crusoe is the prototype of a culture,of an ideology. Robinson is the typical English man who would expand his autonomy in the New World. He represant the English Imperialism,capitalism and,especially the colonialism. Robinson left his country to come to make his fortune around the world,the primary aim of the English colonizer. Later,afterward some troubles with the Moorish,he went to Brazil and he become the owner of a plantation and as a colonizer he come to Africa in order to get some slaves. The slaves would have worked his Brasilian colony. During his journey Robinson was shipwrecked on a desert island where he rebuilt his "small world",his new colony. He fought against the nature and he bent it to the contemporary modernization. Here he built his "home",a hut that is the base of his empire. As a colonizer he chase away and he killed the savages and the cannibals. In the same way the English population of the time submitted the natives of America and Africa and they built the new empire,precticing the farming and the agricolture. Indeed Robinson had a goat which produced milk. As a colonizer he had a slave,Friday. Robinson imposed to Friday his autority,his culture. He forbided him to eat other men,he taught him to speak English,to say "Master","yes" and "no" and to read the Bible. When he described Friday he defined the black men "negroes". This underline his racism. For all these things we can regard him THE PROTOTYPE OF THE ENGLISH COLONIZER.
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Robinson Crusoe is the prototype of a culture,of an ideology. Robinson is the typical English man who would expand his autonomy in the New World. He represant the English Imperialism,capitalism and,especially the colonialism. Robinson left his country to come to make his fortune around the world,the primary aim of the English colonizer. Later,afterward some troubles with the Moorish,he went to Brazil and he become the owner of a plantation and as a colonizer he come to Africa in order to get some slaves. The slaves would have worked his Brasilian colony. During his journey Robinson was shipwrecked on a desert island where he rebuilt his "small world",his new colony. He fought against the nature and he bent it to the contemporary modernization. Here he built his "home",a hut that is the base of his empire. As a colonizer he chase away and he killed the savages and the cannibals. In the same way the English population of the time submitted the natives of America and Africa and they built the new empire,precticing the farming and the agricolture. Indeed Robinson had a goat which produced milk. As a colonizer he had a slave,Friday. Robinson imposed to Friday his autority,his culture. He forbided him to eat other men,he taught him to speak English,to say "Master","yes" and "no" and to read the Bible. When he described Friday he defined the black men "negroes". This underline his racism. For all these things we can regard him THE PROTOTYPE OF THE ENGLISH COLONIZER.
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Risposte
Ti segno gli errori da correggere (sinistra errore, destra correzione):
represant --> represents (2^ frase)
the colonialism --> ometti il "the" (3^frase)
to come to make --> ometterei "to come" e lascerei solo "to make ecc" (4^ frase)
and he become --> ometti "he" in quanto lo hai già ripetuto poco prima (5^ frase)
Later,afterward some troubles with the Moorish,he went to Brazil and he become the owner of a plantation and as a colonizer he come to Africa in order to get some slaves"
La riscriverei cosi:
Later,afterward some troubles with the Moorish, he went firstly to Brazil, and became the owner of a plantation, and then, as a colonizer, he went to Africa in order to get some slaves".
he chase--> he chased
they built the new empire--> they built a new empire
precticing--> practising agriculture (ometti farming)
L'ultima parte la farei così:
Indeed Robinson had a goat which produced milk. As a colonizer he had a slave,Friday, to which imposed his authority and his culture. He forbidden him to eat other men, taught him to speak English,how to say "Master","yes" and "no" and to read the Bible. When he described Friday he defined him the black man "negro"; this is his racism. For all these things we can regard him the prototype of the english colonizer.
Aggiunto 3 ore più tardi:
Eee figurati :) è normale avere delle lacune, ma se ti impegnerai riuscirai a colmarle ;)
represant --> represents (2^ frase)
the colonialism --> ometti il "the" (3^frase)
to come to make --> ometterei "to come" e lascerei solo "to make ecc" (4^ frase)
and he become --> ometti "he" in quanto lo hai già ripetuto poco prima (5^ frase)
Later,afterward some troubles with the Moorish,he went to Brazil and he become the owner of a plantation and as a colonizer he come to Africa in order to get some slaves"
La riscriverei cosi:
Later,afterward some troubles with the Moorish, he went firstly to Brazil, and became the owner of a plantation, and then, as a colonizer, he went to Africa in order to get some slaves".
he chase--> he chased
they built the new empire--> they built a new empire
precticing--> practising agriculture (ometti farming)
L'ultima parte la farei così:
Indeed Robinson had a goat which produced milk. As a colonizer he had a slave,Friday, to which imposed his authority and his culture. He forbidden him to eat other men, taught him to speak English,how to say "Master","yes" and "no" and to read the Bible. When he described Friday he defined him the black man "negro"; this is his racism. For all these things we can regard him the prototype of the english colonizer.
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Eee figurati :) è normale avere delle lacune, ma se ti impegnerai riuscirai a colmarle ;)