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[Irenee98]

Buonasera :D volevo chiedervi se questo messaggio é corretto grammaticalmente, soprattutto i tempi verbali!

[Nicky83]

Hi Sam,
I heard you were ill, how are you feeling now? I'm sorry I couldn't call you, but it was too late. You probably know that we lost the game. Well, truth is, we played really bad.
I hope I can come see you next Monday.
Take care.

:)

[kiki!95]

Togli un po' il 'that', lo usi troppo.
'I knew you were ill'
'I hope I'll visit you'

poi cosa vuol dire "you certainly know we lose, I think we played...(poi non si legge)"?