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bluna
Hi, this is my first video,better and better,i'm so excited! The hottest summer of the last thirty years? pff,really ?
the pandas are rebelling against the sun?, Good job!
Anyways,My name is Bruno and i am a series tv fans
Bones,sherlock,doctor who,castle.
I want to go to sea.
I'm not at my best
Should I go see sherlock, now that I think about it.
Buja!

Mi dite se ho fatto errori di vario genere?
insomma,potete dirmi i vari errori etc?

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eleo
S, adesso mi sembra giusto :)

:hi
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bluna
Hi, this is my first video on youtube,and it gets even better, I'm excited! This should be the hottest summer in the last thirty years, shouldn't it? Have pandas rebelled against the sun? Good work then! Where are my thirty degrees? By the way, I'm Bruno and I'm a fan of the following tv series: Bones,sherlock,doctor who,castle. I'm not at my best and I'd like to go to the beach. Yes, my life is so eventful, right... speaking of which, I should really head off to watch Sherlock. Bujaa

è giusto?

eleo
L'hai riscritto uguale a prima...

bluna
ora come va?

Hi, this is my first video,better and better,i'm so excited! The hottest summer of the last thirty years? pff,really ?
the pandas are rebelling against the sun?, Good job!
Anyways,My name is Bruno and i am a series tv fans
Bones,sherlock,doctor who,castle.
I'm not at my best,I want to go to the seaside.
ya,my real life is very eventful,pretty eventful
I should go see sherlock., now that I think about it.
Buja!

eleo
Io toglierei il the a pandas, poi I am a tv series fan. Poi direi I want to go to the seaside e I should go see sherlock.
Per il resto mi sembra ok :)

:hi

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