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IT'S MAGIC WORKING WITH ZOO ANIMALS
This article speaks about how is a career as a zookeeper. Khaled Fawzy is interviewed and tell us that he organises the education events, and how isn't very easy looking after the animals, so zookepers have be willing all year. Furthermore he says that being a zookeeper is also a way of life,not only a job. As Khaled, only a passionate and enthusiastic people realize their dream, because the competition is high. He suggests to look out for employers who offer the chance to take the Diploma, and also to attend courses on animal management and zoology, because those improve your chances.
This article speaks about how is a career as a zookeeper. Khaled Fawzy is interviewed and tell us that he organises the education events, and how isn't very easy looking after the animals, so zookepers have be willing all year. Furthermore he says that being a zookeeper is also a way of life,not only a job. As Khaled, only a passionate and enthusiastic people realize their dream, because the competition is high. He suggests to look out for employers who offer the chance to take the Diploma, and also to attend courses on animal management and zoology, because those improve your chances.
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Ti sottolineo alcune imprecisioni che ho notato, per il resto mi sembra perfetto! ;)
"WORKING WITH ZOO ANIMALS IT'S MAGIC
This article speaks about how a career as a zookeeper is. Khaled Fawzy is interviewed and tell us that he organises educational events, and how isn't very easy looking after the animals, so zookepers have to be willing all year. Furthermore he says that being a zookeeper is also a way of life,not only a job. As Khaled, only passionate and enthusiastic people realize their dream, because the competition is high. He suggests to look out for employers who offer the chance to take the Diploma, and also to attend courses on animal management and zoology, because those (courses) improve your chances."
:hi!
Ti sottolineo alcune imprecisioni che ho notato, per il resto mi sembra perfetto! ;)
"WORKING WITH ZOO ANIMALS IT'S MAGIC
This article speaks about how a career as a zookeeper is. Khaled Fawzy is interviewed and tell us that he organises educational events, and how isn't very easy looking after the animals, so zookepers have to be willing all year. Furthermore he says that being a zookeeper is also a way of life,not only a job. As Khaled, only passionate and enthusiastic people realize their dream, because the competition is high. He suggests to look out for employers who offer the chance to take the Diploma, and also to attend courses on animal management and zoology, because those (courses) improve your chances."
:hi!
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