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eraus123
The social network sites (also called SNS) are a virtual communities focused on data sharing among users around the world. This service is thought to create new bonds through the exchange of interests, opinions or common ideas tearing down political and geographic boundaries. It is used even for keeping touch with friends, relatives or colleagues who have lost sight. A downside of using these tools is the threat of own privacy. In fact, the new companies are studying social media to find out personal details on each individual. This leads to create a social experiment where we are the ''testing subjects''. i would like to quote a phrase from George Orwell's book: , who has read it will understand quickly. There is no more distinction between private and public life. This is the price to pay if you want to get into a new digital era where the ways of communing have had a substantial change.

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Suzy90
Ciao!!
Ti evidenzio gli errori che ho visto:
"The social network sites (also called SNS) are (togli la a) virtual communities focused on data sharing among users around the world. This service is thought to create new bonds through the exchange of interests, opinions or common ideas tearing down political and geographic boundaries. It is used even for keeping in touch with friends, relatives or colleagues who you have lost sight with. A downside/negative side/aspect of using these tools is the threat of own privacy. In fact, the new companies are studying social media to find out personal details on each individual. This leads to create a social experiment where we are the ''testing subjects''. i would like to quote a phrase from George Orwell's book: , who has read it will understand quickly. There is no more distinction between private and public life. This is the price to pay if you want to get into a new digital era where the ways of communication have had a substantial change."
Per il resto è perfetto!! Ciao!
:hi!
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