Mi perfezionate questa breve lettera?
Salve, premetto che l'inglese è una delle mie materie preferite e lo so parlare abbastanza bene per fare il 2° scientifico ma per esser scrupoloso... Ho scritto questa lettera di mio senza usare traduttori o dizionari.. Potete correggermela in caso di errori o espressioni non adatte?
Dear John,
As always even this year was time to start back school. I was happy to meet again my mates but on the first day I felt really tired because obviously I had wake up earlier than summer days. I arrived at school by car with a friend at 07:40 AM, the first thing I did was going to my new classroom to lean my backpack on the desk. Next I went out again waiting for my other friends. I've been outside until the bell rang. On this day I meet again teachers too... The day passed very quietly, I arrived home at 01:00 PM, not before buying a sandwich at school's bar. I hope that this year will be good as the passed one. What about your first school day? Look forward to seeing you soon!
:hi
Dear John,
As always even this year was time to start back school. I was happy to meet again my mates but on the first day I felt really tired because obviously I had wake up earlier than summer days. I arrived at school by car with a friend at 07:40 AM, the first thing I did was going to my new classroom to lean my backpack on the desk. Next I went out again waiting for my other friends. I've been outside until the bell rang. On this day I meet again teachers too... The day passed very quietly, I arrived home at 01:00 PM, not before buying a sandwich at school's bar. I hope that this year will be good as the passed one. What about your first school day? Look forward to seeing you soon!
:hi
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Ciao, :)
c'è solo qualche cosina da sistemare ma la lettera è molto buona.
As always e even this year sono ripetitivi e ne metterei uno soltanto; it was time to start back school (se no manca il soggetto). Io scriverei:again this year it arrived the time to go back to school.
I was happy to meet again my mates but on the first day I felt really tired because obviously I had waken up earlier than on summer days. visto che eri costretto ad alzarti prima, metterei I had to wake up earlier
I stayed outside until the bell rang. stai facendo tutto al passato e comunque anche questa è un'azione ben delimitata nel tempo passato, quindi va bene usare il past simple
On that day I met again my teachers too... avevi messo il presente ma penso sia stato un errorino di distrazione ;)
The day passed very quietly. (punto) I arrived home at 01:00 PM, not before buying a sandwich at the school's bar.
Spero di esserti stata d'aiuto. :) :hi
c'è solo qualche cosina da sistemare ma la lettera è molto buona.
As always e even this year sono ripetitivi e ne metterei uno soltanto; it was time to start back school (se no manca il soggetto). Io scriverei:again this year it arrived the time to go back to school.
I was happy to meet again my mates but on the first day I felt really tired because obviously I had waken up earlier than on summer days. visto che eri costretto ad alzarti prima, metterei I had to wake up earlier
I stayed outside until the bell rang. stai facendo tutto al passato e comunque anche questa è un'azione ben delimitata nel tempo passato, quindi va bene usare il past simple
On that day I met again my teachers too... avevi messo il presente ma penso sia stato un errorino di distrazione ;)
The day passed very quietly. (punto) I arrived home at 01:00 PM, not before buying a sandwich at the school's bar.
Spero di esserti stata d'aiuto. :) :hi
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