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♥Coky♥
DRACULA
Dracula is an horror story. The story is set in Transyvania in Count Dracula's castle. Dracula is a rich nobleman and a vampire, a man who his food is blood. He wake up at night and sleep all day. It's the symbol of devil. He kill the people with his sharp teeth.

E' un breve testo su Dracula dove devo descrivere Dracula in breve e su chi sono i vampiri; avete qualcosa da cambiare o aggiungere?

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Suzy90
Ciao Coky! Potresti metterla così: "who eats blood" oppure "whose (=il cui) food is blood".
:hi!
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♥Coky♥
grazie mille :)

♥Coky♥
va bene la frase "who his food is blood"? Si può esprimere in un modo più corretto?

eleo
DRACULA
Dracula is an horror story. The story is set in Transyvania in Count Dracula's castle. Dracula is a rich nobleman and a vampire, a man who his food is blood. He wakes up at night and sleeps all day. He is the symbol of devil. He kills people with his sharp teeth.

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