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Last summer I visited many places, but I particulary like Sarajevo. I went there with my family and we stayed to my grandma's for a month. Wr ate tipical foods like pita,cevapi,soups and many cakes such us baklava and tulumba. Some afternoons I hang out with my family and we enoyed to going around the city: we saw Bascarsija, the old Turkish quarter of Sarajevo, then Latin Bridge, where was started the First War World. Moreover we visted the mountains around Sarajevo where were the fourteenth Olimic Winter Games . I think that this trip was relaxing, funny and educative and I hope I will return there next year.
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!Last summer I visited many places, but I particulary liked Sarajevo. I went there with my family and we stayed to my grandma's for a month. Wr ate tipical foods like pita,cevapi,soups and many cakes such us baklava and tulumba. Some afternoons I hang out with my family and we enyoed going around the city: we saw Bascarsija, the old Turkish quarter of Sarajevo, then Latin Bridge, where the First War World was started. Moreover we visited the mountains around Sarajevo where the fourteenth Olimpic Winter Games took place. I think that this trip was relaxing, funny and educative and I hope I will return there next year."
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ti sottolineo alcuni piccoli errori:
!Last summer I visited many places, but I particulary liked Sarajevo. I went there with my family and we stayed to my grandma's for a month. Wr ate tipical foods like pita,cevapi,soups and many cakes such us baklava and tulumba. Some afternoons I hang out with my family and we enyoed going around the city: we saw Bascarsija, the old Turkish quarter of Sarajevo, then Latin Bridge, where the First War World was started. Moreover we visited the mountains around Sarajevo where the fourteenth Olimpic Winter Games took place. I think that this trip was relaxing, funny and educative and I hope I will return there next year."
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