Inglesexdmn urgentissimo!!!!!!

piccolastella
X piacere di questo brano lo dovrei riscrivere partendo dalla fine!!Devo kambiare un po la storia e poi trasformare i verbi attivi in passivo x piacere aiutatemi qst e il brano

Man rescued from sea
A 28-year-old man was rescued by helicopter yesterday in Dover after he fell into the sea near his holiday home.
The accident happened while the man,John Carter ,was walking along a cliff.He was blown off by a very strong wind and fell into the sea,30metres below.Luckly,a woman say Mr Carter in the water soon afterwards and she called the police rescue service.He was taken to hospital with a broken arm.
Last night Mr Carter said from his hospital bed,"I'm very lucky to be alive .My life was saved by the woman who called the police.I can't thank her enough.

x piacere aiutatemi bisogna cambiare la storia partire dalla fine fatemelo x favore mi serve x dmn!!!

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Francy1982
prego se per te va bene io chiuderei il thread ok?:lol

piccolastella
Grazie milleee!!!!!!!!

Francy1982
Mr Carter was arrived at the hospital, his arm was broken,
carter fu ricoverato all'ospedale, il suo bracico era rotto
because he fall into the sea because a strong win was blown off Mr Carter in the water.
perchè era caduto nel mare a causa di una dorte ventata che lo ha spinto nell'acqua
fortunatly the police was called by a woman that has been seen mr Carter in the sea.
fortunatamente la polizi fu chiamata da una donna che lo aveva visto cadere
mr carter had 28 yeras old
mr carter veva 28anni

piccolastella
Scusa solo ke nessuno mi rispondeva:cry...qst kosa signifika?in italiano

Francy1982
correggi gli errori come al solito te l'ho fatta pra in due secondi su quella di prima controlla con il libro di grammatica:
Mr Carter was arrived at the hospital, is arm was broken, because he fall into the see because a strong win was blown off Mr Carter in the water. fortunatly the police was called by a woman that has been seen mr Carter in the sea. mr carter had 28 yeras old

piccolastella
Allora sn 2kose diverse la 1 devo passare dalla fine all'inizio poi x qnt riguarda la forma passiva solo i verbi ok??ma è piu importante il 1:)

X piacere mi trasformate qst brano??vi prego è x dmn ki la sente se no la prof x piacereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Francy1982
e ma credo sia pieno di errori cmq...

SuperGaara
Il suo comunque è his non is...:lol

Francy1982
Controlla l'inglese e anche le forme passive te l'ho fatto di corsa:

when i meet at the mr Cartes he tell me every time his history:
when he was young he was wallking along the clife.
a very strong win was blown off Mr Carter and he fall into the see
luckly mr Cartes has been seen by a woman by a woman that called the police
when i arrived at the hospital is arm was broken
When i remember those events he knows that he's a very lucky man!

SuperGaara
E devi scrivere un brano con tutti verbi alla forma passiva...giusto?

SuperGaara
Partire dalla fine????!!!!

piccolastella
sisi cosi ha detto la prof tipo dovremmo trasformare il dialogo tipo he dice ke l'aereo subito l'ha salvati??io celo devo mettere alla fine!!!!!!!!!!!

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