Inglese, tema comparare due stili di vita..
Ciao ragazzi per domani devo fare 1 tema in inglese d 10 righe...La traccia è:
"Would you like to live in a wild or urban place? What have you felt when you saw the photos?"
L'ho svolto in questo modo:
I would like to live in an urban place because here I could do all I want to do. Infact I can go to school, visit museum, go out with my parents, go to shopping, go to gym ecc. In short, in an urban place I can do all that in a wild place I could only imagine. But in some moments, when I am angry, or sad or tired, I would stay in a wild place to relax, to be deep in thought and in nature. So when I have seen the photos about Kenya and Hawaii, I have thought that they are beautiful place where I could spent my holiday, stay relax and feel good. But I would like to live in a big and great city like New York.
Avete qualche suggerimento o qualche consiglio da darmi??Please!!
"Would you like to live in a wild or urban place? What have you felt when you saw the photos?"
L'ho svolto in questo modo:
I would like to live in an urban place because here I could do all I want to do. Infact I can go to school, visit museum, go out with my parents, go to shopping, go to gym ecc. In short, in an urban place I can do all that in a wild place I could only imagine. But in some moments, when I am angry, or sad or tired, I would stay in a wild place to relax, to be deep in thought and in nature. So when I have seen the photos about Kenya and Hawaii, I have thought that they are beautiful place where I could spent my holiday, stay relax and feel good. But I would like to live in a big and great city like New York.
Avete qualche suggerimento o qualche consiglio da darmi??Please!!
Risposte
a me sembra ottimo, oltre ad un paio di correzioni stilistiche del tipo (non scrivere "to" prima di shopping, aggiungere "the" prima di gym) non penso ci sia altro...
ma tu volei ampliare qualcosa?
ma tu volei ampliare qualcosa?
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