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[carmen.mennella.9]

potete per favore correggermi queste risposte e devo farci un testo

[Suzy90]

Spero che questo possa andare bene:
"There are many celebrities in the 20th century, for example scientists, actors and sport stars. In my opinion, in the world of celebrities there should also be privacy: it should not be a world open to all. Celebrities are often victims of homicide, because of their success and their popularity. Today, the most famous celebrities in the world are footballers. They live a very good life! Celebrities like them are famous thanks to newspapers, gossip and television in particular."
:hi!

[carmen.mennella.9]

Mi potresti aiutare con il testo perché devo recuperare il voto :( per favore

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Questo è il testo che ho fatto io potete per favore correggermelo e arricchirlo con quelle risposte per favore

[Suzy90]

Ciao!!
allora:
1) Celebrities
2) for the political office
3) celebrities. They have beautiful homes, go to parties...
4) about their success.
6) many people becoming famous... I'm thinking about the stars...
:hi!