HELP.... qualcuno mi può controllare come ho risposto a queste domande? Perfavore e grz in anticipo.

Infinito2006
You are going to answer the question: ' How do you feel about sport?'

I think sport plays a very important role in young people's lives: thanks to it, they make new friends, vent their anger, "grow up", experience new sensations and emotions. As a child, sport was seen as a full fledged game, a way to socialize, to learn to listen, to observe the rules and to have respect for your teammates. Sport is also an opportunity for many to keep their body and mind in training, while for others it is a very important educaional guide.

What's your general opinion of each sport?

I think all sports are beautiful and practicable.
But when you start practicing a type of sport, you need to understand that you set yourself goals to achieve in that particular sport and therefore you have to work hard to achieve them. But if there is no effort on the part of the person to play that sport, it will eventually prove boring and impractical.

Mi sapreste dire se ho risposto bene a queste domande? Perfavore e grz.

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Lollo_F
Si', sono abbastanza ben scritti: alcune parole interessanti e nessun errore grave, solo nella prima frase 'sports play' al posto che 'sport plays' (forse e' questo che ti si cercava di dire, perche' si intendono tutti gli sport in generale) e nel secondo testo la ripetizione di achieve.
Tuttavia, si puo' sempre fare di meglio, giusto? Ecco come risponderei io alle domande, stando sulla falsa riga delle tue.

Sports play an incredibly crucial role in shaping the lives of young individuals. They provide opportunities for making new friends, releasing pent up emotions and energy, and experiencing new sensations and emotions. Growing up with sports is not just about playing games, but also about socializing and learning important values such as teamwork, communication, and respect for others. Additionally, sports help individuals maintain physical and mental well-being, while providing an educational platform for some. It is truly a multifaceted aspect of life that should be celebrated and nurtured.

My general opinion is that all sports have their own unique beauty and offer various benefits for those who practice them. However, it is important to note that for someone to fully enjoy and derive the benefits from a sport, they must have a clear understanding of their goals and be willing to put in the effort to achieve them. Without a dedicated and motivated attitude, the sport can quickly become monotonous and lose its appeal. Overall, it is a combination of the sport itself and the individual's approach to it that determines its enjoyment and practicality.

fauciao
a parere mio hai risposto correttamente nella forma, magari riguardo al contenuto potresti arricchirlo, quando parli di rispettare dei tuoi compagni aggiungi qualcosa riguardo al fair play, non so se mi sono spiegato...

Davix110
alla prima frase:i think sport play a very important ecc. si deve aggiungere is in mezzo a plays e a perché manca il verbo

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alla prima frase:i think sport play a very important ecc. si deve aggiungere is in mezzo a plays e a perché manca il verbo

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