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BlackAngel
Ciao ragà potreste verificare se ho scritto correttamente per piacere??

Dear Diary, 24/10/09
Today I come to school soon and when I entered in my classroom, there were only four schoolfellow!!!! Fortunately other six schoolfellow arrived, but we were still not many. Infact we were only eleven on twenty students!! When arrived the our philosophy and history teacher, Mazzei,she was very surprised. We don't know why the other students weren't here. Then the teacher tested Giuseppe, Imma, Vincenzo Po. and Vincenzo Pa. They were good!! After the teacher explained Lenin and Communism. I don't know why, but I really liked this matter!!

Dear Diary, 26/10/09
Today I arrived in school at 07:50: it was a miracle!! At 08:00 Paladini, who is our italian litterature teacher, entered in the our classroom. Immediately she explain a Leopardi's poetry, Il passero solitario: in my opinion, it's nice!! After she tested Alessandro and Mario: to teacher, they studied, but not sufficiently.Instood I belive they were good!! However now I hope my test'll be good...

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Cristina.M
Bene!!! ;)

BlackAngel
Ehi ragà ha detto la prof che vanno bene... Ancora grazie x l'aiuto!! ciao

Cristina.M
Prego, facci sapere come è andata... :)

BlackAngel
Grazie mille ragà per il vostro aiuto!!:blowkiss

Cristina.M
mmm, io la riscriverei così:

Today I arrived at school soon and when I entered in my classroom, there were only four schoolfellows!!! Fortunately other six schoolfellow arrived then, but we were still not so much, because we were only eleven (normally, we are twenty students!!). When Mrs Mazzei, the philosophy and history teacher, arrived, she was very surprised. We didn’t know why the other students didn’t be there. Then, the teacher tested Giuseppe, Imma, Vincenzo Po. and Vincenzo Pa. They got on well! After that, the teacher explained Lenin and the Communism. I don't know why, but I really liked this subject!

Dear Diary, 26/10/09
Today I arrived at school at 07:50: it was a miracle!! At 08:00 Mr Paladini, who is our Italian literature teacher, entered in our classroom. Immediately she explained a Leopardi's poetry, “Il passero solitario”: in my opinion, it's nice! After that, she tested Alessandro and Mario: according to the teacher, they studied, but not sufficiently. Instead I believe they got on well!! However now I hope my test will get on well…

lino17
per me va bene

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