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Immigration: Between dreams and nightmares
Immigration is always a problem actual, also if it started when the man was created.
The immigrants often do a very long journey to save themselves, trying to escape from poverty, unemployment, political and religious persecution, war and dearth. But the conditions with which they travel are a nightmare. They must travel in very small ships, without food and water for days; not all are able to survive.
But the biggest problems arrive when they land the lands of their dreams: they are forced to live thanks begging money and to bear the abuse by racists.
The racism is, in fact, very diffused in each country with a lot of immigrants.
We can have an example of this by Alika Oshodi, an adolescent that come to the USA by Nigeria.
She landed to USA when she was 3.
The biggest problems for her, when she arrived, were the language, which was different than she spoke in Nigeria, and he racism.
In fact she was ridiculed by American boys, who saw in her a different skin colour and difficulty to speak.
But these events have permitted to her to become stronger and to do friends with other immigrants, specially come from Mexico. Consequently she passed the problem with racism and now she is a real American teenager.
She loves her independence in the USA; she says that the racists are only insecure and that the diversity makes the world interesting; very brave by her, after all that she passed.
The same problem is now in Italy: Civil wars force a lot of people to leave her countries for Lampedusa Island’s land.
This sudden exodus has created in Italy enormous inconveniences and protests by citizens of affected area.
A really difficult situation.
Almost ten thousands of people landed on our country, and a lot of these have escaped (and escape) the several control by the police.
But how can we resolve the problem?
We must consider that people, that arrived here in disastrous situation, malnourished and weak.
We can only help these people, full of desire for redemption. But we must stop this immigration.
We can send humanity Aid to try to discourage the phenomenon.
Please, help these people

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