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Carmeen13
Last summer, I had a wonderful holiday with my friends at a Summer Camp. I went to there for four day. The weather was very nice. It was hot in the day, it was cold at night.My friends and I spent some wonderful days, in faith and love. Every morning we woke up early to pray, then we had free time to get to know other people. I made new friends and even our relationship continues to exist.I enjoyed it so much, it was a wonderful holiday, repeat.

Aiutatemi a correggere questa traduzione e per favore se riuscite ad aggiungere qualcosa che rende più ricco questo testo, come delle considerazioni personali su una vacanza con degli amici. GRAZIE MILLE :)

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allison_nardon
Last summer, I had a wonderful holiday with my friends at a Summer Camp. I went to there for four days. The weather was very nice. It was hot in during the day, it was and cold at night.My friends and I spent some wonderful days, in faith and love. Every morning we woke up early to pray, then we had free time to get to know other people. I made new friends and even our relationship continues to exist.I enjoyed it so much, it was a wonderful holiday, repeat.

I think it's always a nice experience to have an holiday with friends because they are used to live in a different way from the other and this is a possibility to learn new things and to understand how to live not depending from our family.
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Carmeen13
Grazie mille!!!!!

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