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In those winter holidays, I had a lot of fun but I also recovered all the energies for the next semester. On December 25th, I went to my aunt's house for celebrating Christmas and I had a big lunch with all my relatives, then we opened the gifts and we watched a movie all together. Then, on December 31st I hang out with my bestfriends and we went to the restaurant and to see a movie at the cinema, it was a very happy but relaxed way for finish this intense year. In the next days, I did all my homeworks, I slept a lot, because I needed to recover all the lost sleep and I enjoyed a bit of time with my family, because we are all so busy and the most of the time we can't spend time together. Those holidays weren't very busy or dynamic but they were very beautiful wherever.
Grazie mille :)
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Cosa ne dite? :)
Riuscite a dirmi se in questo testo ci sono eventuali errori? Dite che è un po' troppo corto?
In those winter holidays, I had a lot of fun but I also recovered all the energies for the next semester. On December 25th, I went to my aunt's house for celebrating Christmas and I had a big lunch with all my relatives, then we opened the gifts and we watched a movie all together. Then, on December 31st I hang out with my bestfriends and we went to the restaurant and to see a movie at the cinema, it was a very happy but relaxed way for finish this intense year. In the next days, I did all my homeworks, I slept a lot, because I needed to recover all the lost sleep and I enjoyed a bit of time with my family, because we are all so busy and the most of the time we can't spend time together. Those holidays weren't very busy or dynamic but they were very beautiful wherever.
Grazie mille :)
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Cosa ne dite? :)
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Al secondo rigo al posto di for celebrating -> to celebrate
"we went to the restaurant and to see a movie at the cinema"
we ate at the restaurant and we went to the cinema to see a movie
it was a very happy
It was very fun (happy è felice quindi credo ci stia meglio divertente :dozingoff)
but relaxed way for finish this intense year
Se intendevi dire "un modo rilassante per finire quest'anno intenso" but lo cambierei con "a"
e for finish -> to finish
and the most of the time we can't spend time together
and almost always (quasi sempre) we can't spend time together
Un'ultima cosa those significa quelli/quelle quindi se tu intendevi dire queste vacanza devi mettere These.
Spero di esserti stata d'aiuto, se ti servono chiarimenti fammi sapere
Ciao :hi
"we went to the restaurant and to see a movie at the cinema"
we ate at the restaurant and we went to the cinema to see a movie
it was a very happy
It was very fun (happy è felice quindi credo ci stia meglio divertente :dozingoff)
but relaxed way for finish this intense year
Se intendevi dire "un modo rilassante per finire quest'anno intenso" but lo cambierei con "a"
e for finish -> to finish
and the most of the time we can't spend time together
and almost always (quasi sempre) we can't spend time together
Un'ultima cosa those significa quelli/quelle quindi se tu intendevi dire queste vacanza devi mettere These.
Spero di esserti stata d'aiuto, se ti servono chiarimenti fammi sapere
Ciao :hi
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Grazie mille :)
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