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[vally32]

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The rain was falling out of the window and with Veronica and the rest of the children playing next to me, I was getting very preoccupied.
I was thinking about their future and I couldn’t see any good things in it.
That was the moment where I came to a very sad but necessary decision.
I had thought about this with my husband since my last child born; we haven’t got any food to give him because both me and my husband coudn’t find a job, and the situation was very stressful.
I needed to move to Madrid and the job that one of my dearest friend proposed me was the best for our family.
The goodbyes were awful and trying not to cry in front of my children was one of the hardest things to do in my entire life.
Me and my husband didn’t say everything to them, we just said that I needed to do a long travel but that I will sure come back soon.
The only strength in this two years were my children and my husband.

Grazie mille :)

[eleo]

Secondo me è tutto corretto, comunque sentiamo anche altri pareri :)