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Gamisa
Dear Sirs,
I am writing to have some information about the North East of England and Hadrian's Wall because I will visit it in the near future.
I recently visited your website and I read the description and the history of Hadrian's Wall.
It is a really interesting archeological find.
I hope that there will be sone cycling itineraries so I can hire a bike and see all the Wall.
Beyond housesteads are they any facilities available which can show you what life was like for the soldiers at that time?
Could you please tell me more details about the soldiers's sleeping quarters and public hot baths? Because in the advertisement it isn't well explained.
I have to ask you a last question: could you please reccomend me where to stay? Is there an hotel near the museum?
Thank you so much for your availability.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully

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# Gamisa :
Dear Sirs,
I am writing to have some information about the North East of England and Hadrian's Wall because I will visit it in the near future.
I recently visited your website and I read the description and the history of Hadrian's Wall.
It is a really interesting archeological find.
I hope that there will be sone cycling itineraries so I can hire a bike and see all the Wall.
Beyond housesteads are they any facilities available which can show you what life was like for the soldiers at that time?
Could you please tell me more details about the soldiers's sleeping quarters and public hot baths? Because in the advertisement it isn't well explained.
I have to ask you a last question: could you please reccomend me where to stay? Is there an hotel near the museum?
Thank you so much for your availability.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully


1) Intendevi some? :)
2) intendevi there? :)

Per il resto mi sembra corretto, comunque altri pareri sono ben accetti ^^

:hi
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