Aiuto per questo ex di inglese...
ciao a tutti...
mi serve una mano per un esercizio d'inglese.
devo inventarmi una storia... su un personaggio... devo inventarmi tutto da quando è nato, qualche vicenda di vita, il matrimonio, e il funerale,,,
più lungo è il testo meglio è...
mi devo attenere a questo inizio: Victor Parrot was born one coldm stormy night in....
e la fine: he died, aged ninety-five, with a smile on his face. over five hundred mourners came to his funeral.
vi pregooooo
mi serve una mano per un esercizio d'inglese.
devo inventarmi una storia... su un personaggio... devo inventarmi tutto da quando è nato, qualche vicenda di vita, il matrimonio, e il funerale,,,
più lungo è il testo meglio è...
mi devo attenere a questo inizio: Victor Parrot was born one coldm stormy night in....
e la fine: he died, aged ninety-five, with a smile on his face. over five hundred mourners came to his funeral.
vi pregooooo
Risposte
-In the Washington Hospital
-It was a birth that united (in quanto prima specifichi il tempo, quindi simple past.
-Between paternal grandparents (togli l'articolo the)
-High school, non hight.
-(Cosa intendi per "Ch?") Metterei "as a champion".
-"Had continued his studies ecc..and graduated at University of architecture ever in the U.S. (la farei cosi)
-twenty five (Se intendi quando aveva 25 anni puoi scrivere "When he was 25"), first loses his (immagino che Victor sia nome di maschio, quindi devi mettere his, perchè è maschile) father for a nasty incurable disease; then, the following year, his mother, commits suicide because he could not stay without her husband.
-(Te la riscrivo). Sad, in a moment difficult to overcome, afterward arrives Kelly, a beautiful girl of twenty-five years graduated at University of Science, daughter of United States' (genitivo sassone, puoi usare anche solo l'accento senza s, in quanto States termina già per sè in s) President.
-Between them comes a deep love for sixty years.
- They get married in a spring day in 2080. Marriage is celebrated in New York in one of the churches arranged by Victor. At the banquet have attended about ten thousand people, including several prominent people. Albert was born after only six months. Victor, after his marriage with the beautiful Kelly, receives many opportunities that make him the greatest architect of the world.
-In November 2145 died in the same hospital he was born, after thirty days of agony for a disease, when he was taken for some project about hotels in Asia.
-Funeral has been celebrated in the family's chapel.It was a private event to not create disturbances in the city. He died, aged ninety-five, with a smile on his face. Over five hundred mourners came to his funeral.
Quando componi qualche storia, o più in generale, quando scrivi in inglese, tieni conto sempre della punteggiatura perchè è importantissima, e soprattutto l'ortografia, perchè ho notato che più parole le hai messe insieme formando un unico termine.
-It was a birth that united (in quanto prima specifichi il tempo, quindi simple past.
-Between paternal grandparents (togli l'articolo the)
-High school, non hight.
-(Cosa intendi per "Ch?") Metterei "as a champion".
-"Had continued his studies ecc..and graduated at University of architecture ever in the U.S. (la farei cosi)
-twenty five (Se intendi quando aveva 25 anni puoi scrivere "When he was 25"), first loses his (immagino che Victor sia nome di maschio, quindi devi mettere his, perchè è maschile) father for a nasty incurable disease; then, the following year, his mother, commits suicide because he could not stay without her husband.
-(Te la riscrivo). Sad, in a moment difficult to overcome, afterward arrives Kelly, a beautiful girl of twenty-five years graduated at University of Science, daughter of United States' (genitivo sassone, puoi usare anche solo l'accento senza s, in quanto States termina già per sè in s) President.
-Between them comes a deep love for sixty years.
- They get married in a spring day in 2080. Marriage is celebrated in New York in one of the churches arranged by Victor. At the banquet have attended about ten thousand people, including several prominent people. Albert was born after only six months. Victor, after his marriage with the beautiful Kelly, receives many opportunities that make him the greatest architect of the world.
-In November 2145 died in the same hospital he was born, after thirty days of agony for a disease, when he was taken for some project about hotels in Asia.
-Funeral has been celebrated in the family's chapel.It was a private event to not create disturbances in the city. He died, aged ninety-five, with a smile on his face. Over five hundred mourners came to his funeral.
Quando componi qualche storia, o più in generale, quando scrivi in inglese, tieni conto sempre della punteggiatura perchè è importantissima, e soprattutto l'ortografia, perchè ho notato che più parole le hai messe insieme formando un unico termine.
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