AIUTATEMI ENTRO LE 5

[Harlemx]

Potete farmi un testo non tanto lungo partendo dal titolo che è questo! :

IF I WERE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL GIRL IN THE WORLD ( che non sia lungo massimo 30 righe massimo)

[{Zahra}]

Mi permetto di fare qualche piccolissima correzione, Marco:

First of all, I think that if I were the most beautiful girl in the world, I think that I would have a sort of double life: hard and easy-beautiful. Hard because probably I would be busy everyday, with meetings, commitments, parties, sometimes far from my parents and friends ecc. Beautiful because I would probably be rich, and very famous so I would have a lot of fans in the world. Also, I think that if I were the most beautiful girl I would travel a lot, because I love to visit new places so much and discover new cultures, and maybe, if I had a job, I would travel because of it. Then I would buy a big house, obviously with pool and a great garden where I can play with my animals, in particular with my dog.

Ho cambiato qualche parola e anche l'ordine delle parole in qualche caso..

[tiscali]

First of all I think that if I were the most beautiful girl in the world I think that I would have a sort of double life: hard and easy-beautiful. Hard because probably I would be busy everyday, with meeting, commitments, parties, sometimes far from my parents and friends ecc. Beautiful because probably I would be rich and very famous so I would have a lot of fan in the world. First of all I think that if I were the most beautiful girl I would travel a lot, because I love so much visit places and know new cultures, and maybe, if I had a job, I would travel due to it. Then I would buy a big house, obviously with pool and a great garden where I can play with my animals, in particular with my dog (scegli il nome).

Ti ho scritto un bel pò di righe, per il resto puoi continuare tu. Mettiti tu nei panni di questa ipotetica donna e pensa cosa tutto faresti. Pensa a come costruiresti la tua vita, dove ti piacerebbe vivere, quale lavoro ti piacerebbe fare, come ti approcceresti alle persone? Ce n'è da scrivere, basta pensarci e le idee saltano fuori. ;)

[Harlemx]

Dai per favore fatemelo voi non ho idea di cosa scrivere per favore!

[MiK194]

Metti insieme più frasi di senso compiuto... ad esempio IF I WERE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL GIRL IN THE WORLD, I would have a lot of money and I would often traveled.

[tiscali]

Scrivilo tu in italiano e ti diamo una mano a tradurlo.
Comunque, non si scrivono titoli della serie "aiutatemi entro le 5", sembra quasi un comando.