Banshee's promise (SAND&SUFFERENCE)(clouds&horizons)- JTC

[TH3 CH3M1ST]

BANSHEE'S PROMISE
(SAND & SUFFERENCE)
After drink all the stuff that's inside my soul
I am close to the downfall
I need to find where to hide
my tears out from the heartroad
Somebody said me "Hi"
was the last man standing on his feet
I' think he stares me
I said "Man, help me I need you"
My house is far away and I'm alone
with sand & sufference
with sand I'm gone
while I suffer I dance"
Rit.)Jack this is you!
but what the fuck are you doing?
Jack don't stare
do you like to see me crying? I'm dying!
I don't know really how
but suddendly Jack held my hand
and what I considered just a friend
cross trough my head, so bad
He said "Girl you are safe let's go home"
but for sure that was another home
Home Jack - in fact
Rit.)
I held a paper sheet that's a song for...
(me)

(CLOUDS & HORIZONS)

Ehy
what is that?
A locked heart that has found himself
Free again
Tonight (x4)
Jack
what does it means?
Means that tonight the wind blows up
and you are repaired in me
Tonight (x4)
I can see you
trough the clouds
I am sure
you will see me
Tonight (x4)
Rain will fall
and hurt
but of course it won't touch
your face
Rit) Jack
here that I promise
My love
to you
(solo)
I promise my love to you
Tonight (x4)
JTC

[TH3 CH3M1ST]

e guarda è un testo tutto azzeccato
monotono

JTC

[sid_vicious]

ora guardo, comunque in che senso ammassato?

[TH3 CH3M1ST]

l' unico problema è che il testo è ammassato, volevo ordine.
Vabè comunque Sid, c'è anche (AurA) un po' più giù

JTC

[sid_vicious]

Bella, davvero.

mi piace il tuo nuovo modo di scrivere è diverso da prima.

molto diverso.

probabilmente lo scioglimento dei lettigrassi ti ha fatto maturare, sia artisticamente che come persona.